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illicit relationship

Shooting_Star

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What is illicit relationship

illicit relationship is a popular web novel written by the author Shooting_Star, covering MATURE, MILF, R-18, ROMANCE, HAREM, MODERN DAY, SLICE OF LIFE, Realistic Fiction genres. It's viewed by 5M readers with an average rating of 4.59/5 and 219 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 498 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Quote of the Main Character "In the future, I will be the wealthiest person in China and sit on my throne with beautiful women in my arms." synopsis: One day, a handsome young man died in a car accident. He suddenly wakes up and find himself in an unfamiliar place., but what surprised him most is that he is taking over someone else's body. He is once again surprised when he knows that he is in a parallel universe with the same laws as his previous world. At first, he only wants to enjoy his life. But after knowing his predecessor desire to be a successful person and make his family happy, he decides to continue his predecessor's dream. With knowledge from his previous life, he starts his adventure in becoming a successful person, and of course, he doesn't forget to seduce beautiful women right and left. Follow him as he embarks on his journey to become a successful person and conquer the hearts of beautiful women. * Support me: https://www.patreon.com/ShootingStars123 Please read at least more than 30 chapters because that is where romance begins ** This novel contains incestuous content, if you don't like incest, it means this novel is not for you. this novel also has R-18 content so please dont read my novel if you are not an adult. *I will edit the previous chapters if I have free time, so please bear with it.* I'm not the owner of the cover, I took it from Pinterest so if you're the owner of the cover and want me to take it down, please tell me and I'll immediately take the cover down.

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Somebeegdeem
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ErickDellafiore
ErickDellafioreLv4ErickDellafiore

you are right, master! this chapter was great! Your mother is beginning to behave like your true lover, and that's good! And really, there's no need for tian to win another woman now, so I hope you deepen and further solidify the relationship of tian, his aunt and mom! That said, thanks for another chapter!

Wallabalooza
WallabaloozaLv3Wallabalooza

The grammar and spelling is really, really bad. Yes, the author already acknowledged this and asked people not to complain about it, but in the end, it is such a major part of a story that there is no getting around it either way. You should simply not start writing and posting things like this before you reach a basic level of how to present a story. Somehow you have an editor and proofreader, yet the result is still this horrifying. I can only dread what the first draft is like. My advice to you if you want to keep posting your stories is to look for someone else to edit and correct your chapters, because the one you're using right now is basically worthless. The content is even worse than the grammar, somehow. A creepy ass guy beats up "thugs" and then proceeds to extremely awkwardly "flirt" with the woman he saved until he got her pants off. That whole sequence of flirting read like something out of a 14 year old kid's fantasies. It has no basis in reality or actual human behavior. Same with the aunt and mother. They see him naked and just start having sex immediately. It is not only completely childish writing, it is just bad storytelling altogether. A lot of the fun in a relationship is in the chase, in overcoming obstacles and feeling like you have achieved something when you finally reach your goal. The draw to taboo stories is that there is a sense of danger and conflict even /after/ the relationship has started, that there is some reluctance and breaking of rules. You ignored all of this. Even if your grammar was perfect, your story would still be borderline unreadable. Work harder on yourself as a writer before posting things. This right here is the equivalent of a 5 year old making a finger-painting and wanting to show it off in an art gallery. You're just not ready.

AraAra
AraAraLv5AraAra

Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.

0Akai0
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Vrethragna
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READERofBooks
READERofBooksLv4READERofBooks

The latest chapters are honesltu disappointing, and Ling Xing Xue is a disappointment, Xiao tian accepted the fact she was married and even had a child and she broke up with him die to cheating which is understandable, but the fact she even goes on a date and is maybe going to devlop feelings for the mcs other identity is basically ntr, she is just a slut

zhenlo
zhenloLv5zhenlo

Good novel 😃🥰 #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok

Za_Giraffe
Za_GiraffeLv3Za_Giraffe

If you're here for the r18 then go ahead but be warned after the first 200 chapters or so we discover that the MC is a piece of trash that doesn't care if an innocent is harmed if it's to achieve his goals. He's your typical wuxia young master that's a good guy on the outside but a scummy manipulative junk on the inside. I don't understand how a person so devoid of empathy can develop "love" for others. My guess is that it's just a possesive obsession fueled by lust. Romance this? Nah we are just following the adventures of a nymphomaniac

Silent_Moon
Silent_MoonLv6Silent_Moon

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BlaccLotus
BlaccLotusLv4BlaccLotus

This kind of story is all i need, i love all mature women in this novel. Who cares about the cliché of story? The most important thing is i do really enjoy this dog fod and steamy story!. "PLEASE DO NOTE, DEAR AUTHOR, most novels of its type have a high drop rate, I really hope you to finish this novel to the end, if indeed a situation forces you to not be able to continue this novel, please give a satisfying ending, no problem even though a rush ending, at least there is still an ending rather than not at all. Because this is one of my most favourite webnovel

Yo_Man
Yo_ManLv4Yo_Man

This review based on the development of the story after XT caught cheating. Well how can i define this, after being caught cheating, XT becomes like someone begging for love. I know the purpose of this conflict, but the conflict was taken too long without any resolution. And honestly for me, you make the harem personality such as LXY not worth for XT after all he do to get her daughter back and last hes pretend to be someone just to get to LXY again? Thats a no move from me

YuuZu
YuuZuLv4YuuZu

im here for science, i dont care about bad grammar or anything as long i still can understand the story. overall is 5/5 for nsfw scene and i hope this novel keep stay away from ntr, betrayal or anything dark

moddddddd
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ErjasD
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talofofo
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Sad_
Sad_Lv5Sad_

Thanks for the updates consistency really like that, going to see if this lives to the hype...don’t disappoint me... * * * +*****+*********+*********+*****+****+*****+******+

Griefer_God
Griefer_GodLv3Griefer_God

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HaithamOUAID
HaithamOUAIDLv4HaithamOUAID

very very very good book ............................................ u should read it, u won't regret it !...............................

FLOOR_GANG
FLOOR_GANGLv3FLOOR_GANG

Hope you continue the story. I am bored reading Chinese novels. This novel really fulfills my desire.

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