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GD_Cruz
GD_CruzLv54yrGD_Cruz

Some novels deserve a second review after we've read enough chapters to form a solid opinion on it, and Wargrounds deserves that attention. Aa I've said before, MMORPG stories are a dime a dozen here on WN, but SilentMild's story differs from the pack quite obviously because of the interesting way the story is progressing. Allow me to point them out: The protaginist, Al, isn't your typical can-do-all character, even with his all-powerful A.I. He's genuinely trying to better himself. If he had one glaring flaw, it's his inability to seal the deal with his love interest. The supporting characters are equally interesting. For example, Poppabear starts out as your 'Leeroy Jenkins' in the starting chapters but grows as a team player in the latter chapters even though he still retains his crazy charge tendencies. The other characters, Sophia, Osho, Solomon, Patric, etc aren't flat characters who conform to just one typical stereotype. Also, there are interesting people like Cyber Husky out there. Lol The writing improves dramatically over the course of 50+ chapters, and you can clearly see the author's genuine desire to provide quality content to his readers because he is trying to improve his work constantly. I've nagged him tons in the first few chapters on proper grammar and he's been diligently editing it to make the writing smoother. The world of Wargrounds so far is interesting too, changing from a Fortnite style game to an openworld reminiscent of WOW. Visually simple yet interesting enough to want to read about. And i hear there's going to be a _______ type competition in the future! If I have one complaint, it's that I don't see an actual villian in the story other than the Y__________ but there doesn't seem to be a connection to our protagonist... Well done on this work and I really hope you keep it up, Author! I'm rooting for you.

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War Grounds

SilentMild

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SilentMild
SilentMildAuthorSilentMild

Thank you brother, villain is about to be introduced in the Battle of Alistor 😁😁😁 Cheers!

GD_Cruz
GD_CruzLv5GD_Cruz

Glad to hear it! XD Can't wait.

Vinayak_
Vinayak_Lv12Vinayak_

I wish all reviews were written like this. And GD_Cruz ur dp is dope.