Review Detail of GD_Cruz in War Grounds
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Stories about going into a game and conquering it are near and dear to my heart. It's why I thoroughly enjoyed the first few chapters of this novel. And I can't wait to keep reading more. I just paused to write this review. The writing is great with very, very few grammatical issues that don't break the flow of what's written down. The world inside the game is interesting and--just by the number of races and job classes--will no doubt contain plenty of fun characters to meet. Al's a decent character you'll want to follow because you want him to succeed. He's had a tragic thing happen to him and you feel like rooting for him to do well in the game. Obviously, SARS is my favorite character in this story. An AI with a 'tude' that really adds a freshness to the whole thing. I enjoy the story so far. Looking forward to more!
War Grounds
SilentMild
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That's true of me too. It's really hard to notice your own errors, right? Sure, as I move along your novel, i'll point out some things I notice. Excuse me in advance for being a grammar cop... lol. I hope you do the same for The Foolhardies. :)
SilentMild:If you have the time to point out the grammatical issues, I would really appreciate it. Been rereading for the past weeks, and some are just nasty and escapes my eyes hehe.
GD_Cruz:That's true of me too. It's really hard to notice your own errors, right? Sure, as I move along your novel, i'll point out some things I notice. Excuse me in advance for being a grammar cop... lol. I hope you do the same for The Foolhardies. :)
GD_Cruz:That's true of me too. It's really hard to notice your own errors, right? Sure, as I move along your novel, i'll point out some things I notice. Excuse me in advance for being a grammar cop... lol. I hope you do the same for The Foolhardies. :)
Huhuhu I got banned because of the use of emojis, I've already reported this to the Admin. Hopefully, it would be fixed tomorrow.
GD_Cruz:Also, I noticed I can't give you powerstones? Just fyi. Any errors in the app?
Good luck with that! I was going to give you my last power stone of the day but no cigar... :D Next time then!
SilentMild:Huhuhu I got banned because of the use of emojis, I've already reported this to the Admin. Hopefully, it would be fixed tomorrow.
Thanks, buddy! I appreciate it. See you around, I'll pop up in your story's comment section from time to time haha
GD_Cruz:Good luck with that! I was going to give you my last power stone of the day but no cigar... :D Next time then!