Well first lets talk about the the novel going premium at the 11th chapter, don't care about that nor will i be biased against it for going premium early. WORLD BUILDING: I'm at chapter 40 and the world is getting introduced as the novel proceeds, it isn't disjointed nor does it have straight chapters with info dumps, so as an orignal it has it's sweet spot all in all better the world building is good. CHARACTER DESIGN: Considering all the web novels i have read our MC has his morals but is not a slave to them and in my opinion he is entitled to his revenge taking his backstory into account, and most importantly he is sane not like some other novels whose MC's have the brain of a 5 yr old soooooooo good mc. And as for the side characters they have their own personality and story meaning they are not one dimensional. STORY: Dont have much to say about the story other than it not being very plot heavy, even a bit lacking but still good. And dont have no qualms about the grammer cause english is my second language, so it's good for me. **: Please be genuine with your ratings and dont skew them in rage of the novel going premium early.
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