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Raw title:- 我怎么会成了反派跟班 or How did I become the villain's follower?
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This novel is just about okay as a concept, but I'm not particularly sure that this one would improve the further it goes. And if it improves in the future chapters, it could be a good read, as long as it doesn't become a dumpster fire. At the very least this is marginally better than the rest of the trial reads.
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"what are your intensions"i mean they are guards not receptionists.
"Halt, may we know your intentions for entering the town?" - Yabadabadu2yrCommented'Up and down,' Khan thought as his concentration intensified, 'Left and right, and circles in the end. I need to do it without losing control over the mana before moving to a harsher exercise.'
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youuu what sorcery is this.
What laid before my eyes was not Robin, or so what I thought he would look like. He has short black hair, a pretty face that would bring shame to any prince you would encounter—not that I have met any, and the very same sharp pale gold eyes that I saw through his visor. So far, so good. Then as my eyes fall to his body—or well, her body it is like my mind went floated away, confused. - Yabadabadu2yrCommented
oooohh backstory, we'll be getting some spicy backstory.
"...never again." - Yabadabadu2yrPosted
At present I feel this work has good grammer and exceptional writing, considering the pool of subpar novels i have seen on this platform. Worldbuilding: Nicely done with subtle introduction of information in a well paced manner, that is what i take from it, do keep in mind i have only read 8 chapters but these 8 were enough to hook me to my phone to ask for more. To the Author, Write this story at your own pace and do not force yourself.
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I really had no idea where to go
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Just how isolated were you...
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We didn't expect a hero
"Geez, you don't have to worry about that. Just do what you're best at. We don't expect a hero when we accepted you, everybody here is just a man doing their best." - Yabadabadu2yrCommented
Or you can say"it dawned upon me that I am gonna take on a big responsibility"
"I'm quite nervous if I am going to be honest, it dawned of me that I am gonna take a big responsibility." - Yabadabadu2yrCommented
it dawned on me
"I'm quite nervous if I am going to be honest, it dawned of me that I am gonna take a big responsibility."