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2023-03-29 12:56

Very good thus far and nothing that turns me away from the story unlike most danmachi ffs. He has pretty good development and doesn’t have max stats 3 days in. I like how he plans to make his own stuff to delve into the dungeon with instead of trusting what someone else makes. I did the exact same(as most people do) in Skyrim and it takes me back to when I still played it. Not many spelling or grammar issues that I could see. Only 14 chapters thus far but I have high hopes. Two of the ffs I’ve seen from you have been excellent. I hope this keeps up and that you remain well in these trying times.

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