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Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv32yr
2023-03-28 09:46

Story is good and chapters are well written, theres also a fair bit of character development although one thing confused me, wich was, Why is there a villain tag if theres already an Antihero tag? don't get me wrong i love the story as Antihero mc but i don't understand the need for the villain tag, you can't have both it just doesn't work

Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi]

LordDylz
4.9
18 Chs

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

always a red flag when you see an author use an antihero and villian tag together. thanks for the notice.

2yr
5
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Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv11

this story is good. hard to explain but definitely this story is interesting to read, not like the random danmachi isekai fanfic in general which basically goes straight to "hestia"-"loki"-"hepheastus" the day after it goes straight to dangeon to start the circle without end (levelling). It's nice to see the MCs have powers to explore and the logical dialogue makes for an enchanting story. I hope this story doesn't get dropped

2yr

Felhavon
FelhavonLv4

So far shaping up pretty good! MC skill synergies as of chap 14 are cool and should be interesting.

2yr
GrizzWald
GrizzWaldLv13

I need moar!!!!! Jk, but in all honesty it is one of the better Danmachi Fan-Fics I love the concept of a smith and his tools. The prose style is better than most Web-novel 'authors' myself included, and the way he writes the conversations between himself and rose, and himself and Riviera made me excited for more lore dumps.

2yr
DispiritedUser
DispiritedUserLv4

excellent story. very creative and original transmigration concept. fun and interesting character with original story (not going with hestia, loki, or other typically used gods)

2yr
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

God d*mn, this is good. The mc is quite op, but shows clear flaws in his character. Unlike other danmachifiction, this one seems to actually focus more on forging and being bros. The character interactions are great and amusing, and the character development is 👌. Pity this has no pat as there would be quite the number who wants to support such a solid fic. I greatly enjoyed it so far and look forward to more.

2yr
Coolpants
CoolpantsLv4

The work is quite good, very interesting and not like the other Danmachi Fanfics(at least doesn't follow the same old story blindly). My only pet peeve would be the Author's lack of using Pronouns, which distracts me from the story when the MCs name is mentioned every 2s. My suggestion would be to use pronouns in context of a single dialogue, you can also stretch it to be used in conversations between 2 people, by good usage of paragraphs. Anyways I will stick around to see where this goes.

2yr
niko314
niko314Lv11

all you need now is to update the story more. its been a bit without updates and i would love some more. thank you for the incredible story so far, regardless.

1yr
Plebston323
Plebston323Lv2

Why NO UPDATE?!?! I cry in silence...

1yr
Iteq24_24
Iteq24_24Lv4

This is one of the only truly good danmachi stories keep it up author

1yr
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