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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv13yr
2021-11-28 01:36

"What Third Hokage didn’t know was that Nàiluò activated the God-level Chakra system." ...........................................................

CLOUD SHINOBI CONSPIRACY, SARUTOBI HIRUZEN PERSUADED ME TO DIE

0_Ancient_Daoist_0
4.6
75 Chs

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Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv10

did you even read it yet? (I haven't read it either ill reply with my opinion after like 3 hours or smth)

3yr
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Some people argue that because they wrote in the title or genre of their story that their story for example has a "system" I and others can't or shouldn't write reviews like "this is a system story" and give 1 star. I think those people are very funny and should quit writing.

Venerable_Far:did you even read it yet? (I haven't read it either ill reply with my opinion after like 3 hours or smth)
3yr
1
Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv10

sorry for the late reply, I read it and it was really good, you should delete the review

InternetSaint:Some people argue that because they wrote in the title or genre of their story that their story for example has a "system" I and others can't or shouldn't write reviews like "this is a system story" and give 1 star. I think those people are very funny and should quit writing.
2yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

even if I did and found this story good, I would still only give 1 star

Venerable_Far:sorry for the late reply, I read it and it was really good, you should delete the review
2yr
Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv10

why? do you dislike chinese novels? racism at its finest.

InternetSaint:even if I did and found this story good, I would still only give 1 star
2yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

you are either brain damaged or inherently stupid.

Venerable_Far:why? do you dislike chinese novels? racism at its finest.
2yr
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Kaiju_Theo
Kaiju_TheoLv4

bro this book is lit 🔥 the story flow is amazing with an op mc and a good depiction of characters I love it keep doing this bro finish this book pls 🔥🔥🔥🔥it's amazing writing skills u got there and I hope u make it

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Sondre
SondreLv14

Mostly just bashing fic against the hokage, danzo and both their clans. Other than that the author keeps jerking off the mc by making everyone way dumber and everything always being seen through by the mc. The story is also filled CN tropes and vibes, you could change the names of characters and places to some chinese names, and you would not be able to tell that it was a Naruto fanfic. Mc is a Hyuuga, but mostly uses ninjutsu and a sword to fight. The writing is mostly easy to read, though there are some mistakes. Nothing that makes it unreadable.

3yr
fallz
fallzLv14

I really really like the whole plot. This fanfiction is awesome at it really highlights how a spy should act in enemy territory and make a villain destroy his heroic reputation without any repercussion. Basically an MC reincarnated as a hyuga outwitting the nara brains. LIT[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv13

Thaaanks translator-sama 😊😊[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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MetalSheep88184
MetalSheep88184Lv1

The story flow of this book is really amazing. Really loved the Mc and the way he deals with the situations. Loved the thrilling aspect and cannot wait the upcoming updates.

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Lardeen
LardeenLv14

In later chapter MC gonna give op gentle fist upgraded jutsu to clan for main branch! I really dont like sharing skills. and his clan dont support him from beginning!

3yr
Devil_Hex
Devil_HexLv5

Review at chp 11 Looks like the original author is a fan of cultivation novels. And he decided to incorporate all the cool looking but terrible troupes in the fic. Love the humor and the dialogues in the fic. Unfortunately, most other characters are made to be evil/weak willed and just pathetic. Asuma is shown as the typical Young Master from those novels. While the Konoha's leadership is shown to be evil who would fall to any level to kill the MC while still trying to maintain their image in the eye of the public like a typical Righteous path power from the novels. Can be a fun read if you never read a cultivation novel before. Unfortunately, if you already have read many, then you won't like it.

2yr
JOATDemon
JOATDemonLv14

I love the story so much and I hope that the author dose not drop the story and keeps it going in the same quality as it is now and I can't wate till the next chapter comes out

3yr
Fernizer
FernizerLv14

I don't know how it got so many 5 star reviews, because it isn't worth it. Story by itself is 3/5, not considering that translation seems to be more like mtl with a bit of editing done by hand. Which should drop it to 2.5/5 or 2/5. I didn't come here to read mtl.

3yr
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