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TheGreatestWRITER
TheGreatestWRITERAuthor5yr
2019-08-20 19:55

Sorry but I want review my novel too :) , Writing Quality ?? just you all wait and I am sorry if my grammar is not too good, I will improve it step by step Story Development ? story will interesting, just you all wait Update stability ?? 2 day per 1 chapter, World Backround ? my own world I create it Charackter design ? it good too

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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Well first off change the info instead of die put *died When you say 2 mc what do you mean ? Is it gonna be where it just constantly changes perspective every chap/paragraph ? cause cbf to read it if so will be too confusing trying to understand it all.

TheGreatestWRITER
TheGreatestWRITERAuthor

Depending on situations, it can be paragraphs or chapters. And thank your critic

TheGreatestWRITER
TheGreatestWRITERAuthor

I will write a different since this novel use third person pov

TheGreatestWRITER:Depending on situations, it can be paragraphs or chapters. And thank your critic
Hazielr
HazielrLv5

Interesting.. Its a shoujo ai or yuri??

TheGreatestWRITER
TheGreatestWRITERAuthor

No it not those two, it just a action fanfic novel with no romance, yaa for now

Hazielr:Interesting.. Its a shoujo ai or yuri??
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