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Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv144yr
2020-07-28 10:44

Before chapter eleven I was loving this novel,great things where going on but then the author did something terribly stupid. He did the classic, sentient A.I goes rogue and tries to kill their creator. I can not tell you how much this ruined the story! If you want an amazing novel then read the first ten chapters but for the ones after that,it’s all crap. Very disappointed. 

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Reidrain
ReidrainAuthor

You were too hasty to drop it or even make a review. If you'd read the interlude after that chapter, you'd have had a different opinion.

Monke
MonkeLv1

Bruh, delete your review because you're bringing the score of a really good book down. That entire thing was all a literal ruse. The A.I never went rogue. If you didn't drop as soon as something bad happened, you'd know that.

The_High_Father
The_High_FatherLv3

Isn't that fic on fanfiction?

Reidrain:You were too hasty to drop it or even make a review. If you'd read the interlude after that chapter, you'd have had a different opinion.
Reidrain
ReidrainAuthor

Same author, different platforms

The_High_Father:Isn't that fic on fanfiction?
Ken_Uzumaki
Ken_UzumakiLv3

You know you can always just delete the review, if it's irrelevant to the story.

Reidrain:Same author, different platforms
Overwrit
OverwritLv3

Wasn't it? I may have read it wrong, but I didn't really understand how that went down, I just understood that the AI made a deal and then regretted it.

Monke:Bruh, delete your review because you're bringing the score of a really good book down. That entire thing was all a literal ruse. The A.I never went rogue. If you didn't drop as soon as something bad happened, you'd know that.
Immadropitall
ImmadropitallLv2

Stupid, you didn't even read the next chap idiotic review.

Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv13

ZAMN!!! This dude is an idiot 😍😍😝😝😻😻

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