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parv_kaurLv53yrparv_kaur

I find it interesting as its first sequal... Their quality time was perfectly described and their feelings for each other and past work details also.. But from what i left confused and suspicious is of james's identity and Okay he just met her in flight only but how he got her address and the way he was saying that we will meet sooner than you think .. twice it felt something curious to me ... Or just tell that i am thinking nonsense 😛🤭

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Love Separated by The Atlantic

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No, what you mentioned above is no nonsense at all :D. For the past few days, I was thinking about the way that James managed to find Ana and basically how I am going to go on with the revision and what sections of the story need rewriting. Thank you so much for pointing some of the stuff out, I will defiantly have a look at them and, fingers crossed, improve the story. Thank you so much for this review :D.

parv_kaur
parv_kaurLv5parv_kaur

Glad you find it helpful 🙂

Strale:No, what you mentioned above is no nonsense at all :D. For the past few days, I was thinking about the way that James managed to find Ana and basically how I am going to go on with the revision and what sections of the story need rewriting. Thank you so much for pointing some of the stuff out, I will defiantly have a look at them and, fingers crossed, improve the story. Thank you so much for this review :D.
parv_kaur
parv_kaurLv5parv_kaur

Glad you find it helpful 🙂

Strale:No, what you mentioned above is no nonsense at all :D. For the past few days, I was thinking about the way that James managed to find Ana and basically how I am going to go on with the revision and what sections of the story need rewriting. Thank you so much for pointing some of the stuff out, I will defiantly have a look at them and, fingers crossed, improve the story. Thank you so much for this review :D.
parv_kaur
parv_kaurLv5parv_kaur

Okay if that's the case please do inform me when your revisions of that book will complete .. okay?... I really will love read that again

Strale:No, what you mentioned above is no nonsense at all :D. For the past few days, I was thinking about the way that James managed to find Ana and basically how I am going to go on with the revision and what sections of the story need rewriting. Thank you so much for pointing some of the stuff out, I will defiantly have a look at them and, fingers crossed, improve the story. Thank you so much for this review :D.
Strale
StraleAuthorStrale

Yeah, of course. Thank you so much for reading my work. ☺️☺️

parv_kaur:Okay if that's the case please do inform me when your revisions of that book will complete .. okay?... I really will love read that again