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2019-11-08 00:13

Absolutely amazing job.. please continue the work.. Looking forward to it. Loving the sci-fi element. The story premise is good and if looking for slice of life I would recommend more interactions of mc with family and friends. Some Character development of his sibolings may do some good. Food for thought Cheers!!!

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