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2019-09-18 06:21

So far this series has been amazing, its well thought out, near to none grammatical errors, and fairly realistic. It has a system thats more of a helper than an OP tool. The world building is very well done. The authors doesn't give the entire history of the world in one go, they slowly give small info dumps and hints about the world making you realize this might not be earth and you're left craving more. This series is only about 20ch in when i made this review so take it with grain of salt. But ive been seeing very small hints and foreshadowing that this novel will become a sy-fi action and it is extremely well done because you don't know if its true or not, it makes you think. And when a novel manages to make me go back and read to see if the hints might be real I give an automatic 5stars. Summary/Pro's -well thought out -small but precise info dumps -not OP system/character -overall entertaining -so far amazing worldbuilding Cons- -It's basically a slice of life rn (but that could change in the future) -story pace is kinda slow -stop making me want moar Like I said take it with a grain of salt, the story is only 25ch in, It can easily change.

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Thanks for the praise. I acknowledge the con about the pacing, and I'm trying to lay enough of the ground work so that it doesn't feel like a bunch of numbers without cause. Hopefully the new increased release schedule will help with some of that feeling.

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