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mithun
mithunLv124yr
2020-01-25 14:17

Machine translated novel.repeted story scenario.low eq mc.started getting boring.no character development until now.world background copied from other novels which didn't even do a good job.

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burntpotato
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(actual review below) Chapters: 926 Chapters Status: Complete Year Started: 2019/01 Year Ended: 2019/11 --- Views: 13.13M Total Recommendation: 1.41M Fans: 660K --- QiDian Rating: 8.8 (278) QQ Rating: 6.1 (1026) --- Author: Get Lost 滚开 Rank: Great Author's Other Works (Translated): 【The Wizard World】 【Mystical Journey】 【Way of the Devil】 --- Link: https://book.qidian.com/info/1013861765 --- Rank 【All Categories】 * #64 Men's Monthly Ticket List (August 2019) * #64 Men's Monthly Ticket List (September 2019) * #60 Men's Monthly Ticket List (October 2019) Rank 【Genre】: * 【XuanHuan】#15 Men's Monthly Ticket List (August 2019) * 【XuanHuan】#13 Men's Monthly Ticket List (September 2019) * 【XuanHuan】#13 Men's Monthly Ticket List (October 2019) - * 【XuanHuan】#76 Men's All Time Recommendation Ticket List +++ [1] Recommendation Ticket/Pass is similar to WN's Power Stone, you get them daily. Users usually get 3 if the level meets. [2] Monthly Ticket/Pass is a higher tier Power Stone in which you could only acquire by becoming buying and spending paid coins. Users are usually limited to 5 tix monthly. ◽◽◽◽◽◽◽◽ I've seen at least 2 novel pickup request of this in the forums and have been looking forward to it ever since this has been on the voting pool. [Ch15 read] ✔️Great start, very descriptive. I like it that way so much, makes my reading experience imaginative. I don't know why some readers claimed it as fillers or dragging ✔️Calm and rational MC. ✔️Very intriguing dream world with horror and thriller tone but very bearable to readers weak at those. I hope there would be a review who actually read further from translations.

Shadowles_Immortal
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Korriberg
KorribergLv14

Holy ****. Is this bad. The writing (translation quality) is totally fine, stability of updating as well. No qualms there. But boy oh boy is the story boring. Started out kind of interesting, and it felt like the story could develop to a gem, but I was wrong, so wrong. There might be some small spoilers for the first ~100 chapters. Didn't (couldn't) read further. Alright, let's get this over with. Worldbuilding could be worse I guess but that would be a story written by a 3 year old. The dream world has a few interesting points but the author only touches them and moves on. Imo that is one of the worst points about the book; it seems like the author has a story outlined in his head (more or less) but he keeps forgetting to write everything coherently. He touches on some subjects and forgets them completely, or he just talks about stuff he hasn't introduced before but thinks he has, I don't really know. Everything is so incoherent... Now for the MC... My god is he dumb and boring as hell. He is introduced as a not especially genius or strong guy, his main feature according to the author, is being able to keep calm in every situation. But soon it becomes clear that the MC is a powerhungry, emotionless, loner dimwit. Don't get me wrong, I have no problems whatsoever with a dark, powerhungry, ruthless MC. Quite the opposite, I normally like those storys. But while reading this I found myself either being incredibly bored, cause the next moves where obvious, or hitting my head on my wall in frustration, cause the MC changes his mind, doesn't think at all and is unbelievable slow (in the brain department). I think I could rant on for quite awhile but it's not really worth it. This is one of the worst books I have ever read. My compliments to the translator for making it at least bearable. Definitely NOT recommended. Hope I didn't screw up my english, not my first language. Yours truly, Korriberg

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