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Story Development: It just seems kind of forced. It seems like he's the only moving character in a static world. He is captured at the beginning but the force who captures him isn't mentioned again for a while and their influence is quite non-existant. World Background: Lots of logical errors in size and scale of credits (The Currency) and a few other things. Its fine that he gets a ton of OP stuff but why only him? It seems like he's the only person who is using the system and everyone else is sitting on their butts, chilling, waiting for the MC to come near them before they do something productive in their life. There are a few other problems. While the characters are very good, the countries and maps are not logical. He calls the top continent (Cyphix) to be around the size of china. Well, China has roughly 700 official cities however in the book, we only learn about one in that continent. Seems a bit out of proportion. The maps are well done, but the story doesn't seem as logical in its worldbuilding. He acquires an artifact that is worth 20 million credits. Everyone is like "WOOOAAAHH", they're like that is so expensive. But then the next moment they are like can we buy twenty of your armor you took ten seconds to make from ingredients which you have a supply (Perhaps infinite of? Never is clarified) of for 200,000 credits. Of course, I have not read too many chapters but my opinion is that the world building in the beginning is not the best and therefore is most likely going to continue to be subpar at best in the future.

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