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Review Detail of Katelijne in Reborn: The Unexpected Twist

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Katelijne
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I was not a fan of this. The story develops really slowly, we have to go through chapter after chapter with the same scenarios taking place over and over. I felt like I could've skipped every 10 chapters and not really miss out. The male lead who disguises as a girl, is annoying and juvenile. I think this was targeted towards really young people who may not think too much about the really offensive and stupid ways he goes about to catch the heroine's affection. He kidnaps her, gropes her constantly, never listens to her opinions, ridicules her, pushes his will on her, acts angrily/aggressively at times when he doesn't get his will, mockingly laughs at her and won't leave her alone. Very romantic indeed. The author keeps mixing "he" and "she", mentions the wrong name on several occasions, has passable English but it's riddled with mistakes (you understand the sentences, but mistakes are abundant). English isn't my mother tongue either, and I know I make mistakes too, but I'm not publishing a book and asking people to pay for unlocks. I read until chapter 100, getting more and more annoyed with the stupidity of both leads. Then the timer on the free chapters ended, and I won't spend any precious chapter unlocks to find out when the male lead, disguised as a girl, will grope the female lead again. I'd skim the rest of the book if it were free. I guess I could write more about my gripes with this book, but I feel that writing this review took too much of my precious reading time already. I wish the author good luck in her future endeavours.

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