great novel, there is no awkwardness when the pov/story change and every paragraph. story developments, fast paced for me cause the plot thicken bellow 100chap, the cliff hanger made by telling other story first before continue suit my taste, telling other character story makes the story development grow. character design is a bit confusing for me since i dont know some of the race look like, many author didnt describe much assuming reader know. its too early to judge how the mc or character in the novel act since i didnt finish 100chap yet. skip updating stab world background i feel its too big to play than needed actually except the mc will jump around to another realm or world but it could be describe later as a surprise. for me what this novel worth reading is author writing style and have different system. and i like kingdom building.
F_Riley
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