uh i forgot the name of my hero its a robot from zordon era

bruh its scarily accurate, but if any other have a life like this chapter the key is communication, from your observation you know ur parent is like, ask for help to find job from their circle, sometimes they didn't realize that you need help because you never ask and you have too much pride. talking heart to heart is needed tell all your heartache that they caused. remember all those happy memories when ur child with them. remember before ur regret that they are getting old.

this book writing style is excellent, but its separate story chapter and information chapter for some reader its unique,as for me its make my brain to read it carefully less then miss the plot i call those information chapter cliffhanger chapter, personally prefer blend those chapter. if author keep changing pov its sure thing story development can be rich, i just hope author makes the story unpredictable, deception to the reader not just in the story. well i take a guess since i just read till chapter 25, that will be more character show up since author keep changing pov am afraid author brain will blow up, this novel isn't suitable to be webnovel if he want to make masterpiece as for world background well i need a map lol

just a bit longer okay till u have saving to go to brothel

oh i just realize, charm its like a magnet no matter handsome or not, its makes u comfortable when u near.

quote often misleading people often follow the quote but actually "dumb idiot effort often betray you" u cant say effort never betray, its need more than effort sometime luck talent knowledge or other element is needed every ppl have their own way to be successful.

quotes often misleading you need more than effort actually, "dumb effort always betray you"

its actually good novel, whats wrong with lvl up fast? there is a lot of overpowered mc novel thats more popular than this and yet these mobs complaining and judge this novel trash its just plain stupid. its just because ur taste is changing not because the novel is trash

its actually good novel, whats wrong with lvl up fast? there is a lot of overpowered mc novel thats more popular than this and yet these mobs complaining and judge this novel trash its just plain stupid.

sigh its actually have a great idea hint system, but the story isnt to my liking just like the other comments, face slapin character, harem drama, fast paced, didn't describe the world background, if ur new reader perhaps its good read novel, but if u already read many face slapin novel this one is too bland

for me this one of the best plot story i read so far

its lil early i agreed, it caught me of guard that the mc revealed as cultivator by his bos, u can long winded this tho but its still enjoyable. perhaps that trash rushed novel affects u unconsciously lol

i see the title, i add it, the title already describe this novel. restaurant, shop, winemaker, bookstore, the concept its to my liking. cause am already tired of those colleting girl, face slapping, young master, top of the world godly shit novel, will it be the one let's see

this novel will be one of my favorites, no both of ur novel will be perhaps all of it. i love the story setting, changing pov, the pace, i didn't find any hateful character or some act that I don't like, its easy to read despite the grammar problem. i just hope the author didn't drop it, or push himself too much, what i want is ur good chapter not rushed one. take ur time and finish ur problem first. i will wait in September for ur great chapter.

i dont like the mc too ignoble, especially when he throw away the woman, just live like a monk would you, plot armor is too heavy, if someone found his secret he become demon if not he become a coward

bro this just some suggestions perhaps if u want to write another novel slow pace like this, try changing pov, and improve conversation between character. or if u want to improve ur skill at that try rewrite some funny conversation u had. cheer's [img=recommend]

read 40s chap , i like this kind of novel, in some area its become repetitive story thats whats the slow paced novel problem is, i like the mc act like a normal people , easy to read, im bored of those arogant novel, so this one is fresh novel for me , i will read some more-

yesh u can fly if u drink it...fly to the heaven

if the system didnt have knowlegde how to build shelter under the small sand dune that mean the system is dumb, search house underground small sand dune in google and tell them they are dumb

or search the dune house underground built