Review Detail of thegamer in Strongest Ninja In A Hero Society

Sorry to say that but you really should read your story from the beginning till the end and see if you like what you read or not because I see many changes in the MC is personality and all might is way of thinking And not to mention the flaws in your story like the family's bloodline the seal, the time it took for the kidnapping, the fight with all might, the choice of joining the UA high school instead of using ninjutsu and other means to locate his mother And if you think that there isn't any tracking technique that can locate her then you are mistaking because there is many like for example, Kakashi's summoning technique Fanged Pursuit Jutsu that can summon dogs that can track the target without using chakra or the shadow clone and byakugan combo, I know that you may say that they don't have chakra and staff like this but did you forget that chakra is actually the body's life force and even if they don't have chakra the byakugan has many abilities like heat detection x-ray like vision or even Kaguya is ability to see into someone's memory and thoughts 😩😩So you see author you are not using everything you have correctly Good luck with your story