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DollShururu
DollShururuLv121yr
2023-08-07 18:44

So much spam reviews, i'm having doubts whether this is really good or not. The story was written in the most Undetailed as possible, it has a complete lack of descriptions. The descriptions were basically.. for example; town would be called "Starting town" no descriptions added. The edge of the floor is called "end of 1st floor" no descriptions added. "forest" is just forest. Author never bothered explaining how actions or scenarios looks like. "Green plant monsters" "Boar monster" "Wolf monster" everything was described in the most boring possible. Rather than just saying "the wolf attacked" why not say describe their colours or at least how they attacked like; "the wolf lunge, attacking with it's sharp claws" or something. The writing is like author expected all readers to memorized the whole series.

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Ive read all of it to the latest and I dare say this is the best novel when it comes to SAO and it might be a romcom in my eyes! All character still retain their personality it just that the "Fate" played heavilly in Kiritos life now he in Aincrad has uner power XD Also did love how Author made both seem woven together! Keep it up Author best wishes

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The more I read this fanfic of masterpiece the more shocked beyond believe I was. Simply the best SAO x OPM fanfic ever. In this novel, there's no flower vase damsel in distress, only heroine saved themselves with their own power and the "help" of MC. The epic ultimate fight scene not lose to OPM. Drama and humor so fulfilling almost make the original SAO look negligible. I hate the fact that I didn't found and read this sooner. Thank you very much, author-san! I hope you can continue your work and write way more amazing chapters of this fanfic and many more~

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Oh someone finally decided to post this on this website? Took long enough. Although I read it on another website.... I did not like it there and probably won't like it here either.

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Damn this is good. Not to mention the chapters are long xD. Filling in words- “You said you worked hard? Well, maybe you need to work a little longer.” – Saitama “I’m not a hero because I want your approval. I do it because I want to!” – Saitama “I’ll leave tomorrow’s problems to tomorrow’s me.” – Saitama “Human beings are strong because we can change ourselves.” – Saitama “If the heroes run and hide, who will stay and fight?” – Saitama “If you really want to become strong, stop caring about what others think about you. Living your life has nothing to do with what others think.” – Saitama

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