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ThanatosGreekGod
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2020-10-01 12:20

Honestly I got to chapter 8 and I dont blame the fanfic for this but DC is so confusing which means that this fan fic is confusing but problems i have with the fan fic itself and Not the DC universe would be these Cultivation level were not explained as of chapter 8 Reincarnation specifications were briefly mentioned but didnt go into too much detail Where MC gets his money is unknown if its his parents money then at leat say cause im just assuming thats how it is Some characters were introduced but never given backstory as to who they are I know a little about DC but even Someone who reads the comics probably needs at minimum a refresher on who these people are I like OP from the start MC but meh thats just my preference and not something bad from the novel cause some people like weak to strong more than Op from the start Idk about anyone Else but I just cant connect with Any of the side characters and forget who they are sometimes Soooooo that was my critisisim i perfer not leaving junk reviews like spamming “bad” over and over with one star so i decided to give some constructive criticsism idk if it will help In anyway but I at least tried 🤷‍♂️

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Thanks for that. I am in the process of fixing things like this. Along with grammer. A lot of the cultivation was explained bits and pieces later to prevent info dumping. The side characters are given only a little bit of backstory because of the different versions of them. ALong the way, I do give more as the indvidual one starts to rear its way in with age. A lot of people were met as youngesters or during a period that effects their origins. And the Dimensional Collapse why the mc is here is the reason why Origins are messed up and things are just wonky at times. Characters like Selina start to exihibt traits that push them in a different direction. But characters like Claire Selton, not so much considering their are not a lot of versions of her. MC Money is from his parents then what he does himself after leaving the Wayne Manor. He does have money from previous lives and selling things. Just didn't go into direct detail since he hadn't gone broke yet. Thanks for the feedback though.

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