FrozenTidez
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It is always good to see this part in a fanfiction that blatantly tells the history of some families.
What relying on himself? Cu handled almost everything, or the benefits for the system did with rewards and snippets of information. The only rely on himself he did was barely the building of Taoyun or whatever it's called. Even that was not used by him since he didn't have to learn everything from scratch and had the nebenefits of the Everlasting Temple or whatever he gave up without real concern.
He has a point. As in the fact the events played out without what you did, even mattering and blatantly, making that Harry still did something despite the fact he didn't. This chapter and the last dont even match events at all.
i believe they are with little editing to it. Not even reading it as well.
Its them using Bankai not Shikai.. The Shikai state is the same as soul reapers, using a release phrase and all that.
If it has the power to actually do that, then the purpose of you all is further dragged down to nothing.
You kean the thing you made and can make more of??
Did he forget that the hollow powers sealed in his mother then in him ate the sealed power of Engetsu?
Megan is the only one even close to being exposed enough to the role to help with this. The other two.. not even close. Were Kitty's parents killed off?
That is true
The writing is great. that I can say. Characters and depictions of them not so much. The Naruto comes off less as a version of himself from the series and more of a pull from other fanfictions. The potrayl of DC characters are just hit and miss at most times. The skill of AU Naruto and strength just does not fit against other DC characters.
He didnt find the ring. A memento from the mother.
You are here because people actually dint like you, though.
You are technically a 7th-grade kid. A 5th year would really be a sophomore. then again to much machine translation and different cultures really say which.