yeah, deleted my first review because the author said my worries would be dispersed.... yeah that wasnt true, the author just made everything exactly how i didnt want it to, **** that

It’s very good so far i can’t wait for more. I wish you could update faster but it’s fine as long as you don’t drop this. Keep up the good work.👍

This RWBY fanfic differs from others while at the same time remaining the same by adjusting some elements to the story. All in all it’s a good story and I hope it will stay that way in the future.

The story is kind of story that Just goes downhill after certain chapters. So you Will be mostly frustrated about how mc acts. Mc cant even change Major plot points at birth like preventing summer's death or penny's creation.

in writing quality i mist admit that this book is really good and the setting give us reader a new fresh concept but in story development the author still left many things forgotten and not develop after mentioned in the plot, this book also lack proper relationship development both with mc and his peer or family, author tend to leave many things unanswered or happen for no reason world background also still unpolished

Really interesting story. Keep going I love the idea and you clearly have a talent for writing. Maybe use more paragraphs because it is a bit difficult to read.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

This story has great grammar, pacing, and story. With how the story is it is leaving me a bit annoyed with all the other RWBY fanfics as not many live up to the story.

good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!