Writing quality is amazing compared to most of the stuff on this site/app, it's a breath of fresh air, truly. Finally something coherent that's properly written. You won't get broken English sentences when reading this I guarantee it, though I won't promise perfection. Then again, when is anything ever perfect? I can't speak for the stability of updates as I've started reading this when there were 40 some chapters, but this novel has left me with a good feeling so I'll just write it down as 5 stars just because I can. The story development is amazing, plot wise as a fan fiction, it has slight deviations from the canon but nothing bad really. Everything is explained thoroughly and seems well thought out, I couldn't really find anything that sounded rash or negative without getting nit-picky about details. I'm in love with how the story is going so far, I've read many RWBY fan fictions before, but I've got to say, this one takes the cake, and by a landslide at that. I HIGHLY recommend this to any RWBY fans out there. The character design is wonderfully done, from the main man himself to other OCs, all of which are introduced smoothly. The characters from canon really do feel and act as they should, or rather, how it feels they should. The personality that each canon character shows makes the novel feel like it's a real thing and not a fan fiction, man do I love this fan fiction. XD The world background is another 5 stars for the count. Full of details, making the experience for the reader enjoyable, even more so for those who have a vivid imagination like me, and can actually paint the scene in their mind. From close environment, to ambient sounds and lights, to clothing, armors, weapons, flora etc. etc. etc. I could go on but you get the point. {on a side note} This novel's prologue is an important phase and is detailed and very well done. In fact, the prologue is the very reason and foundation that sets the main character's personality for the rest of the novel. I love how almost everything, if not everything makes sense. Author-san, if you're reading this review, know that I appreciate your work immensely and I wish for you to never drop this golden gem!! If you could reply this review, even just saying that you've read it, it would mean a lot. Thanks for the read, and I can't wait for m more chapters!!

yeah, deleted my first review because the author said my worries would be dispersed.... yeah that wasnt true, the author just made everything exactly how i didnt want it to, **** that

It’s very good so far i can’t wait for more. I wish you could update faster but it’s fine as long as you don’t drop this. Keep up the good work.👍

This RWBY fanfic differs from others while at the same time remaining the same by adjusting some elements to the story. All in all it’s a good story and I hope it will stay that way in the future.

The story is kind of story that Just goes downhill after certain chapters. So you Will be mostly frustrated about how mc acts. Mc cant even change Major plot points at birth like preventing summer's death or penny's creation.

in writing quality i mist admit that this book is really good and the setting give us reader a new fresh concept but in story development the author still left many things forgotten and not develop after mentioned in the plot, this book also lack proper relationship development both with mc and his peer or family, author tend to leave many things unanswered or happen for no reason world background also still unpolished

Really interesting story. Keep going I love the idea and you clearly have a talent for writing. Maybe use more paragraphs because it is a bit difficult to read.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

This story has great grammar, pacing, and story. With how the story is it is leaving me a bit annoyed with all the other RWBY fanfics as not many live up to the story.