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Review Detail of DoctorBlaze in Harry Potter - Another Dark Lord [COMPLETED]

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The writing quality is abysmal, either English is not the author's main language, or they didn't put a lot of effort in. Many of these issues could've been adverted with basic grammar checking software or a proof reader. The story development is very hard to follow, and is held down significantly by the writing quality, if I can barely slog through a chapter then its fairly difficult to follow the overall story. The characters are very surface level, an issue with the extremely lacking dialogue, both in quantity and quality. Being a fanfic would normally help, but somehow the author fumbles the bag even with that. As for world background, it isn't that great. The novel itself is a fanfic so it has most of the work done for it, but any expansion of the world by the author, one of the main points of a fanfic, was executed poorly. Concepts are just introduced, with no real explanation, the magic system is just said to work some way with no real depth when introduced. For example: in the beginning it is alluded to that the MC uses some method to grow in magic ability, but it is hard to follow, and an explanation is stashed in a random paragraph mentioning meditation techniques or something about a couple chapters later. TL;DR This novel is mediocre, with poor writing quality, and not worth your time. The concept is interesting but executed poorly.

Harry Potter - Another Dark Lord [COMPLETED]

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Hmmm, fanfictions aren't only about expanding on the original work , some explore the journey of a different individual in similar setting, So expecting every fanfiction to be the way to think they are supposed to be is bound to bring you boat loads of dissatisfaction when you explore more fanfics . hmm , I enjoyed the emotions involved in mc's journey , no doubt frustrating but then again if you want every line of the novel to be only in your comfort zone then sorry pal , you might not have read the real good ones...... OR ....This might just be me rambling. Well, that sums-up about everything I wanted to say . Good luck finding your ideal read ,pal.