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Nameless_Godless
Nameless_GodlessLv54yr
2020-04-06 13:08

This eventually becomes a super predictable generic harem novel and I'm still confused on how, why and when it happened the author had all the signs and work done towards a Great harem story and one day every girl in the harem lost their personalitys and took up the copy and paste "Stare at the mc coldly all the time, enjoying seeing him in trouble or suffering and do absolutely nothing on their own." Even worse Kisuke started falling into the generic Mc role more and more each chapter it also feels like he has made absolutely no progress in anything in atleast a 100 chapters. More More problems appear and we have seen absolutely nothing of the mc preparing for it at all we keep hearing mentions of projects we have never seen come to light or even getting clarified in anyway it feel like they are only said as an excuse for the mc's lack of progress "OH it's cause he is working on so much at once in the background." Is so weak and uninteresting. So as I said on Rebirth in Bleach before I will still read this but this has gone from "Must read as soon as it's out." To "Read it if I have nothing else.".

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UnnamedKing
UnnamedKingLv2

Too much text

Nameless_Godless
Nameless_GodlessLv5

Too much wrong with the the story to put it in a little amount of words.

UnnamedKing:Too much text
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I_Am_L_72
I_Am_L_72Lv3

Are you serious? I would like you to be a little more precise about what is wrong with this fanfic. Is it the fact that he don't get stronger (can he even get stronger when he have the hogyoku?) ? because I planned to invest some time to read it but I don't want to waste my time... Also where exactly (what chapter) are you in this story for you to already see problems upon problems?

Nameless_Godless:Too much wrong with the the story to put it in a little amount of words.
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

as long as he wants to be stronger the hogiyoku will make him stronger as long as he wants to win the hogiyoku will make him win as long as he wants to live the hogiyoku will make him live the only way for him to not get stronger or for him lose is if he wants to case and point Aizen while being sealed inside a chair under central 46 was passively getting stronger even while doing nothing even when separated from the hogiyoku

I_Am_L_72:Are you serious? I would like you to be a little more precise about what is wrong with this fanfic. Is it the fact that he don't get stronger (can he even get stronger when he have the hogyoku?) ? because I planned to invest some time to read it but I don't want to waste my time... Also where exactly (what chapter) are you in this story for you to already see problems upon problems?
I_Am_L_72
I_Am_L_72Lv3

Thanks for the answer. But from what I've read so far, The hogyoku is damaged and is slowly restoring itself so I guess it's normal that he can't get stronger just by wishing it?

Dethpool_Mlg:as long as he wants to be stronger the hogiyoku will make him stronger as long as he wants to win the hogiyoku will make him win as long as he wants to live the hogiyoku will make him live the only way for him to not get stronger or for him lose is if he wants to case and point Aizen while being sealed inside a chair under central 46 was passively getting stronger even while doing nothing even when separated from the hogiyoku
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

even damaged the hogiyoku should work in a similar way to it's sealed self where percentages of it's full power can be used at a time

I_Am_L_72:Thanks for the answer. But from what I've read so far, The hogyoku is damaged and is slowly restoring itself so I guess it's normal that he can't get stronger just by wishing it?
Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4

but that's basically just my head cannon (the part where the hogiyoku should still be useable similar to it's sealed state)

I_Am_L_72:Thanks for the answer. But from what I've read so far, The hogyoku is damaged and is slowly restoring itself so I guess it's normal that he can't get stronger just by wishing it?
JustAReader3
JustAReader3Lv4

that's not very Kisuke urahara considering how it said in bleach that he is the type that can outmatched the enemy if your saying is true then this is really bad not only that harem is really not suitable for urahara based on review that read here it would seems that the author seems like doesn't not really care about Kisuke urahara personality traits which is the thing that makes him interesting and love by fandom as such i pass i don't want to read something as bland as that

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