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Lost_Gamer
Lost_GamerLv14yr
2020-09-13 21:19

Love the story, nice world building and great character development. Have a little issue with the grammar but not too much, it didn't really affect my reading experience. I'm looking forward how the story would progress, there is a lot of tease here and there but it didn't reveal much. This story is big I'm guessing it would reach +1000 plus chapter I just hope the writer continue. Nice work

VRMMO: World War 3

LaziGamer
4.9
60 Chs

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Shionokami
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Good stuff right here. We got a good concept with a nice plot and good characters that get equally good development! All in all it's really good, if any of you is reading this review just go ahead and read it your not going to be disappointed I swear!

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What I love about this story is the realistic touch to it, meaning humankind itself is relatable. For example, Mars and technology updating, the lack of resources for humanity and WWIII itself, make this story a gem. Thank you so much for writing this story, plz make more chapters. Keep up the good work.

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Shamelessly reviewing my own novel hehehehe. I'm encouraging people to read this novel of mine and place their thoughts in the comment. I'm open to all criticism as I believe that it can improve my writing. I hope you all enjoy your reading. Thank you very much. I plan to upload 1 chapter a day -Lazy Gamer.

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I am usually a silent reader and I don't really post a comment but yayy this is amazing. 😍 So glad I found this story!! The plot is so interesting please don't stop updating 🙏🏻

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