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LaziGamer
LaziGamerAuthor5yr
2019-07-14 20:32

Shamelessly reviewing my own novel hehehehe. I'm encouraging people to read this novel of mine and place their thoughts in the comment. I'm open to all criticism as I believe that it can improve my writing. I hope you all enjoy your reading. Thank you very much. I plan to upload 1 chapter a day -Lazy Gamer.

VRMMO: World War 3

LaziGamer
4.9
60 Chs

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Hey LaziGamer. Just wanted to let you know someone has stolen and published your story on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/World-War-VRMMO-Hank-Hassan-ebook/dp/B08JVFC569/ You can get the story taken down if you submit a copyright violation since you own the story. There's a button at the bottom of the linked page. Best Wishes, Ramon

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LaziGamer
LaziGamerAuthor

Thank you Ramon for informing me. I already reported it. I just hope that it would be taken down, although I know that my writing is not yet up to standard, I work hard for every chapter I posted. Seeing my work got stolen just like that doesn't feel good.

feedback:Hey LaziGamer. Just wanted to let you know someone has stolen and published your story on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/World-War-VRMMO-Hank-Hassan-ebook/dp/B08JVFC569/ You can get the story taken down if you submit a copyright violation since you own the story. There's a button at the bottom of the linked page. Best Wishes, Ramon
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