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Review Detail of Espress0 in RWBY: A Mob Story

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Honestly I was expecting more, he nerfs himself at the beginning and I was ok with the decision thinking it would be more fun it wasn’t, the nerf was there because he was supposed to be slightly OP but he got his teeth kicked in his first official fight by some guard, then he sacrificed summer to escape only to get pinned by some random old man the hell was the point in the nerf then if he was weak as shit ,and the main character he was immature and annoying with his interactions with others, I was excited for this because the powers he took but it went down the drain with the character development and storyline. Thanks for reading

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RWBY: A Mob Story

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I wrote this when I as sixteen so sorry for the dissappoint but I'm twenty one now I can't remember what I was writing I. I was jposting my half-finished chapter from back in the d

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zaped:I wrote this when I as sixteen so sorry for the dissappoint but I'm twenty one now I can't remember what I was writing I. I was jposting my half-finished chapter from back in the d