Review Detail of Oto in Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life

Simply unreadable. I wanted to try this out, but it’s almost as if the author put a bunch high school-level words into a randomizer and spread them throughout his sentences in order to make his writing seem more chic. There are commas in the middle of a phrase, comma splices everywhere, run-on sentences, non-sensical sentences, etc... You name it, this author has it. It’s almost as if this novel was written for companies to use for their interview examinations for incoming editors. Let’s not even go over the chuunibyou plot and naming. You want to try this novel? Go ahead. But don’t say you weren’t warned.