The concept is great. However the MC is a spectator kind who doesn't truly do anything to change things up. The story is the usual one with a lot of self ego stroking. Whilst I was honestly looking forward to a true magus in the Potterverse, this was too much of the usual, a regular phenex wasn't good enough so he mixed it with a thunderbird and a bunch of others and now has a bird familiar that can control all elements, etc etc Honestly, those who read many things should understand it well enough. I'd have ignored the overdone stuff if the story was atleast not following the Canon one as closely as it does, but unfortunately, it does. There are also plot holes a plenty in the story. Which I pointed some of them out but honestly. I'm pretty sure the author knows of them for a while already.
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