The story is some what confusing but you can fill in the gaps with your imagination. The Grammer is possibly the worst that I have seen in a while (3 months.) But if you can ignore it you be fine, I hope. World is welp nothing but I've read way to many Harry Potter Fanfics and that includes the original books.

NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE NOICE!!!HAHAHAHA Had to do it man EXP EXP EXP EXP by the way...gpod book man it's too bad there are no more uploads but I am enjoying it so far! KEEP IT UP!!!!

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Very good! I love that he doesn’t take over for Harry but really acts like a big brother!😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Ok heres a honest review, The MC is OP but sadly the author made him an idiot, for him to be master sorcerer its disappointing to read him like a clueless idiot. he cant even tell that voldemort is stuck at quirell head and thats fucking disappointing for a magician who can use the 3rd true magic.

The concept is great. However the MC is a spectator kind who doesn't truly do anything to change things up. The story is the usual one with a lot of self ego stroking. Whilst I was honestly looking forward to a true magus in the Potterverse, this was too much of the usual, a regular phenex wasn't good enough so he mixed it with a thunderbird and a bunch of others and now has a bird familiar that can control all elements, etc etc Honestly, those who read many things should understand it well enough. I'd have ignored the overdone stuff if the story was atleast not following the Canon one as closely as it does, but unfortunately, it does. There are also plot holes a plenty in the story. Which I pointed some of them out but honestly. I'm pretty sure the author knows of them for a while already.

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