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PleasantPresentLv105yr
2019-07-27 12:36

The author dropes this if he doesn't have 10 reviews at chapter 14 so here I am writing one since the storie was okay till now. The idea has potential but till now it isnt realy used, another negativ thing is that it is pretty fast paced and we dont get to know the characters realy. There arent many describtions and mostly conversation. But I still thing the story isnt bad and instead is okay borderline good.

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Demiurge_OharaAuthor

really..? maybe I should add more at they're conversations and get-to-know stuff.... tanks for the tips bruh~!

PleasantPresentLv10

No thank you for the chapters and sorry if my review sounded a bit harsh

Demiurge_Ohara:really..? maybe I should add more at they're conversations and get-to-know stuff.... tanks for the tips bruh~!
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

Meh... I accept criticism if my skills are improved

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