Review Detail of JohnRaymondRuba in The First Order
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What a start! I can absolutely say this, with all certainty that this book's first 10 chapters are pretty solid. The book is well written, plus the translator has done a great job. I just hope that the quality will remain constant Base on the first 10 chapters: No stupid cliches!
The First Order
The Speaking Pork Trotter
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Is that even possible. Because Iâve seen some pretty retarded novels getting scores as high as 9. So my trust on scoring systems is pretty low. However, I will wait and see how the reactions to this novel will be.
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FiendStar:Is that even possible. Because Iâve seen some pretty retarded novels getting scores as high as 9. So my trust on scoring systems is pretty low. However, I will wait and see how the reactions to this novel will be.
No it isnt possible . It has good starting with good mc . But as like other chinese novel . It starts to get extreme with things with no reason and logic . There are many occasion when things are put without reason and logic . I dont whose fault is this . But sometimes things are so easy to see taht it gives no intrest to read . And i dont know if it fault of author or not Or he dont know how to make intresting things . But he knows how to spill beans before the right time . Which makes it loss intrest even more . In story it tries to make mc op in everything but is not possible with reasoning . One of good thing about it was its mc and his personality in early stages of novel but it started to get down bcoz of one forced romance plot . After taht story has not much of intrest . But there are some side characters with intresting personality taht makes story somwwhat intresting .
FiendStar:Is that even possible. Because Iâve seen some pretty retarded novels getting scores as high as 9. So my trust on scoring systems is pretty low. However, I will wait and see how the reactions to this novel will be.
Moving on to a new arc soon, I think the quality is still there. Almost no illogical stuff since I scrutinize that myself as well. ONLY ONE WAY TO FIND OUT
Furion41:how is the novel now? Does it keep with the quality of the start? Etc. no plot armors, good english, no brainless characters, no illogical things
NO! Don't ever read this book. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.
Furion41:how is the novel now? Does it keep with the quality of the start? Etc. no plot armors, good english, no brainless characters, no illogical things
Ive already gone way past that... also the the virtually no important characters die lmao not sure what you mean. Its a typical chinese novel so naturally it has no shortage of bad parts to it, but honestly its still entertaining to read.
Xuen:NO! Don't ever read this book. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.
Chen Wudi is literally one of them. You guys might say it's part of the story to let Chen Wudi die, and I understand somewhat, but there's many other ways that the author could have prevented/salvage the situation, but he just wanted to write Chen Wudi's death. Even if the author wanted to let him die, he can choose not to write it in a way that's so forced and also shows how stupid and stubborn the MC is. The MC could have brought his friends and families into the wilderness or bring them to far away forts instead of putting them in danger by bringing them to those forts that they know are going to be involved/destroyed in war. Sometimes the story doesn't make sense at all, and those situations feel extremely forced. I've finished reading [Lord of The Mysteries], and the story is so natural. I know tragedies happen, but i don't like the way the author writes it. Sorry if there's grammatical errors as English is not my main language. I've also read this story in the original Chinese version, that's why the feelings that I felt might be more pronounced. If there's anyone looking for similar stories with a similar setting/world building (powerful animals, dangerous forest, superpowers), you can try [Chronicles of Primordial Wars]. Even though it's not fully translated yet, but I've already finished reading the book (raw), and it's much better than The First Order.
Furion41:Ive already gone way past that... also the the virtually no important characters die lmao not sure what you mean. Its a typical chinese novel so naturally it has no shortage of bad parts to it, but honestly its still entertaining to read.