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ThatOneGUy
ThatOneGUyLv135yr
2020-02-22 12:16

Learn english more because honestly your writing sucks so much balls with how broken it is with haphazard chinglish spelling that its giving me an aneurysm!

Traveller of Two Worlds

JamesLabel
4.5
116 Chs

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Preph
PrephLv14

Ahhh Yes complaining about free content way to go!

4yr
CagieWagie
CagieWagieLv4

Free content can also be absolute ****. Do you like free dog poo? Here have some 🐶💩 you retarded baby brain.

Preph: Ahhh Yes complaining about free content way to go!
4yr
Preph
PrephLv14

Ahhh soo do you know how hard it is for some people to learn a different language and the courage it takes to write for all of us “ retarded baby brain” people and its free. Oh and if you were able to learn to speek to dogs in china and ask them for free poo to send to me i also would not complain about watching the video of that but if you sent the dog **** thats no longer content its harassment “RBB” signing off

CagieWagie:Free content can also be absolute ****. Do you like free dog poo? Here have some 🐶💩 you retarded baby brain.
4yr
CagieWagie
CagieWagieLv4

Ain't gonna read that wall of text cause I don't give a **** about what you think lmaooooo

Preph:Ahhh soo do you know how hard it is for some people to learn a different language and the courage it takes to write for all of us “ retarded baby brain” people and its free. Oh and if you were able to learn to speek to dogs in china and ask them for free poo to send to me i also would not complain about watching the video of that but if you sent the dog **** thats no longer content its harassment “RBB” signing off
4yr
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Rudeus_Greyrat_6448
Rudeus_Greyrat_6448Lv1

Thats not true

4yr
Other Reviews
Spare_
Spare_Lv14

I love this story, but wish that he wasn’t trying to make a nation and was just going places and being badass with no women to hold him back, does anyone know one like that?

5yr

JamesLabel
JamesLabelAuthor

I've decided to review my own novel, and give it 5 star..HAHAHA, i tried to regularly update this novel, probably 1 chapter in every 2 day (If there's no problem). by the way, the story is a little bit slow pace for now..anyway thanks for the voters.

5yr
illegal_incognito
illegal_incognitoLv14

so, my review, this focuses more on kingdom building, the mc is OP, he has his own harem of slaves that he did not touch, dungeoneering is a breeze, he buys slaves and rescue them to add to his kingdom. I wanted it to focus more on business or making money but, its more kingdom building than anything else.

4yr
joe_joe_0273
joe_joe_0273Lv1

Well done anak muda Kebenaran tidak pernah kalah, dengan ini papazola member vote yang paling OP d muka bumi.. Untuk maju lahh novel malaysia.. Maju lahhh majuuuuu

4yr
Atrax
AtraxLv14

Was surprised by this, whilst the grammar is pretty bad, like mtl, I thoroughly enjoyed the story after getting through the janky sentences. Had all I want in a binge novel except more chapters haha

4yr
JustLor
JustLorLv11

Reading this made my day, I like more likely love the story and anticipating more chapters. Hope you don't drop this and also hoping a mass release if ever.

4yr
Mani555
Mani555Lv4

Good novel to read in this boring time and I really enjoy it very much. Don't quit halfway without completing this novel . When I read this novel it made my day and I really don't want it to stop

4yr
rylinan
rylinanLv14

i really like this story from mobster to king and businessman. the traveling between worlds is nicely done. developments sometimes feel over the top and timeline skips not always clear. but overall a good story, nice pace and super strong MC. updates could come more often its really irregular right now.

4yr
Uesuz
UesuzLv13

the story is amazing,the people that love modern vs fantasy would absolutely NO doubt would LOVE this novel (some might even flipin worship it).I would love to see Aeternum develop into an Empire.to cap it off ITS GODDAMN AMAZING NOVEL SO PLZ DONT DROP.thank u althor

4yr
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