Review Detail of SilentWatcher in Chat Group For Magicians
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The grammar is a little poor yet tolerable, they say a few things on what the character looks like, for world building they say the they building yet never go over the background. For people who have never been there it's hard to picture the surroundings with little detail about it. Other than that the MC has no goals let alone a end goal.
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Aside from the two double spaces and the lack of a few punctuation marks for shortening I don’t see any grammatical errors.
painkillers:The irony is so great that the author's poor grammar became rich when compared to yours. Roast
I read the first chapter for some context and from what I could tell aside from some wording here and there, there’s very little errors. What makes the story fairly hard to read (at least from the beginning) is the point of view used. If the story were written in third person the description of certain details would be far clearer not only that the story will be able to flow in a more organic way rather than simply having *blank* occur and than moving onto something that has little to no relation.
Wrong choice of a noun, he used "a'' instead of "an" on near end part of his post, I can't also quite understand the "the they building" he was talking about. I don't know if said complaints and correction has to do with grammar, but at least make yourself more understandable if you're gonna complain about other people's "poor grammar".
SoberAddict:Aside from the two double spaces and the lack of a few punctuation marks for shortening I don’t see any grammatical errors.
