Review Detail of SaxonViolence in Chat Group For Magicians

This is a good interesting little story. Sorry Kyosea, but my three spirit stones are already committed to be split 2/1 amongst two other stories and while you've got something good, it isn't good enough to displace either of my favorites… I must say though, I very much liked the idea that some ordinary dude got an invite to a magician's chat group purely by accident… And you kinda blew that almost immediately by having your "MC" be the "Destined One" with beaucoup backstory. EE… One other thing, there has already been one case of "let's memory-wipe the mundane so they don't find out the truth…" So far as I am concerned, tampering with someone's memory is a FAR MORE REPREHENSIBLE CRIME than simply killing them. Faced with a choice—and none of these folks get a choice—"let us erase the most significant experience of your life OR we'll have to kill you…" I'd unhesitantly chose death. Altering someone's memories is a form of mental rape—and the Victorians quite properly named rape "A fate worse than death."