This story is great! I know lots of people out there loved the whole cultivation chat group thing but this one is seemingly just as good so far! The writing quality is good (why can’t most writers realize that “I” should be capitalized?) and the character is not completely flat like most original stories. Guaranteed there isn’t much character building yet but there’s like 12 chapters right now. But the way he interacts with the world around him stays constant and he doesn’t immediately change to some domineering individual once he becomes a magician. I hate it when stories have some meek hearted person then the moment he gets even the slightest bit of power he goes and crushes all other opposition and so far there have been 0 young master characters. So yay!
Kyosei
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