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Review Detail of Wandurer in Prime Originator

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Wandurer
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Writing quality is top notch. But the character development/designs? I’d read this only because the storyline and writing is good. However, if it wasn’t for the weak and path—- females who turn useless the moment the mc appears. I’d have loved reading this, unfortunately the female personalities are all the same. upity noses, low to med level intelligence. Over all useless but only serve a purpose in upping the mc’s attractiveness. Is their only females in this series? Where are all the males? The ones who are at least intelligent and serve a purpose by either being frenemies or high class non-friend. they only serve to be pulped to embers or humiliated. And it’s like everywhere the mc goes there is always a female who fawns over the mc as soon as he appears or ‘accidentally’ or ‘unintentionally’ touches them in some way or another pumping up their Stupidity. however I have only reached around chapters 20-30 so who knows, fingers crossed.

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Thank you for taking the time to write a constructive review. 🙏🙏🙏 It’s my first time writing and I know its flawed, but i will strive to improve🙏🙏