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Review Detail of SkyAboveTheSky in Birth of the Demonic Sword

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SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv51yrSkyAboveTheSky

I'm one of the earliest reader, it was a good journey, book was enjoyable even tho it wasn't perfect. I have lots of criticism, dialogues felt annoying and lifeless at times, diversity and depth was lacking, it wasn't very captivating at times, quality of writing could've been better- like use of figure of speech etc. I have praises for it as well, I felt authors passion in this book when he started out, entire journey before immortal lands were very enjoyable for me. Goodluck for future, I'll give your other book a try as well

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Birth of the Demonic Sword

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EkVillain
EkVillainLv2EkVillain

is there harem in it? I don't like harem novels or novels where mc started changing and become simp for family or any of his wife. it's better if they just die just tell me, about this thing. would be of great help

SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv5SkyAboveTheSky

there's no harem, it's one of the reason i read it

EkVillain:is there harem in it? I don't like harem novels or novels where mc started changing and become simp for family or any of his wife. it's better if they just die just tell me, about this thing. would be of great help
EkVillain
EkVillainLv2EkVillain

how about mc changing later on from ruthless to ig less ruthless. or mc started caring about people, which he shouldn't according to his character. unless from the start I can see, that this mc is like that. tbh I just hate it, when author for no reason suddenly change or do a reversal in novel, for any reason. idc. but I don't like such abrupt changes. sorry I wrote this much. it's just that, I read too many such novels that I literally curse at such authors now. tags don't have harem, romance or any tag which sounds like he will have anything. still just to be sure I am asking, as this is a really long novel. thx man

SkyAboveTheSky:there's no harem, it's one of the reason i read it
SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv5SkyAboveTheSky

MC is ruthless from start, by end he seem like a edge lord and cringey. Try few chapters and see for yourself

EkVillain:how about mc changing later on from ruthless to ig less ruthless. or mc started caring about people, which he shouldn't according to his character. unless from the start I can see, that this mc is like that. tbh I just hate it, when author for no reason suddenly change or do a reversal in novel, for any reason. idc. but I don't like such abrupt changes. sorry I wrote this much. it's just that, I read too many such novels that I literally curse at such authors now. tags don't have harem, romance or any tag which sounds like he will have anything. still just to be sure I am asking, as this is a really long novel. thx man
EkVillain
EkVillainLv2EkVillain

thx man. it was really helpful 👍

SkyAboveTheSky:MC is ruthless from start, by end he seem like a edge lord and cringey. Try few chapters and see for yourself