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KDSaltyPony
KDSaltyPonyLv124yrKDSaltyPony

Like it so far! Good writing (English isn't my main langage thought, so I might not be good enough to see all the possible mistakes ^^), good update flow. For the story itself, the world is consistent and it is not that often that I saw authors using the three main dantian and not just one. Mixing magic and martial arts by that mean is not use often too. It seems like the author as put some thoughts in it to explain the process and not just saying "magic exists because it does...". Even thought the MC seems locked on one mindset, I like the fact that he is ruthless and don't care about moral bullsh*t or doesn't force logic to achieve his goals. He is quit straightforward, realistic and honest with himself. I wouldn't say he is a vilain, it's more like he does what's need to be done to survive while getting stronger. There is no Harem and smut cr*p so far, that's a good point too! I don't think the novel and the MC need romance either. Even if some characters are obviously here just to allow the MC to get some benefits he needs for the sake of making progresses in the story (the hunters or the unorthodox cultivators), it doesn't affect the reading that much IMO.

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Birth of the Demonic Sword

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KDSaltyPony
KDSaltyPonyLv12KDSaltyPony

Just forgot to say that so far, reincarnation wasn't that meaningful, hope it will have a biggest impact on the story. Even thought it's not that much of a problem if it doesn't, it still create an "expectation" feeling ^^.

KDSaltyPony
KDSaltyPonyLv12KDSaltyPony

(Dammit, can't edit my comments XD): just to ad that it wasn't pointless either at the start of the story, for those who don't know the story and are wondering.

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

Thanks for your review. I will read it too 😊

KDSaltyPony:Just forgot to say that so far, reincarnation wasn't that meaningful, hope it will have a biggest impact on the story. Even thought it's not that much of a problem if it doesn't, it still create an "expectation" feeling ^^.
KDSaltyPony
KDSaltyPonyLv12KDSaltyPony

Hope you will enjoy it! 'cause I do ^^

No_Reading_No_Life:Thanks for your review. I will read it too 😊
KDSaltyPony
KDSaltyPonyLv12KDSaltyPony

My bad, little edit: I was too hasty on judging the reincarnation part, it starts taking a bigger place in the evolution of the character. In fact, making things about reincarnation punctual like that is even better and allow the focus on many other things in the story. The univers of author-san is quit rich and more transmigration stuff would take too much place, slowing down the progress of the story. Sorry author, I badmouth you _(-.-)_!

KDSaltyPony:Just forgot to say that so far, reincarnation wasn't that meaningful, hope it will have a biggest impact on the story. Even thought it's not that much of a problem if it doesn't, it still create an "expectation" feeling ^^.