Review Detail of youngknight79 in The SSS Ranked Soldier and the Beautiful Girl

Keep up the story that your doing because it gots a lot of potential of it being a good story ,but add a little bit more meat to the chapters to give the reader a feel for the characters and not a rushed chapter that brezzes by to fast for me to enjoy setting and actions of the characters, and all keep on going and improving the story 👌👍