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ForestMist
ForestMistLv145yr
2020-03-01 05:15

Honestly can't understand this 5 star reviews: This is a power fantasy where the main character controls time, but what makes the story undesirable is that based on his cheat he is practically a god, and psychopath, rapist you name it. this is basically what happens if the wrong type of person actually acquires power and instead going through interesting adventures discovering the mysteries of the universe or of our past, he is just playing god and toying with the life of people and no one can stop him.

Master of Time

Erosire
4.3
237 Chs

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Prometheus2000
Prometheus2000Lv4

So what's your point every fucking villain in any comics or anime is the same they get a power that they don't deserve. He is basically a God but he didn't create human so why shouldn't he do what he wants. Even heroes have Use their powers for their own benefit so why are u complaining it not like this guy forced you vto read his story. If are one of those selfless pricks that think everything they say or do is right then you're just hypocrite. Dude just go read other stories if you want to read about "responsible" unselfish bastars.

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Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

Bro author of course cant force anyone to read but why do you think authors make synopsis its there for to get readers intrested and it escalates to reading the novel and from there the reader can judge the novel for themselves

Prometheus2000:So what's your point every fucking villain in any comics or anime is the same they get a power that they don't deserve. He is basically a God but he didn't create human so why shouldn't he do what he wants. Even heroes have Use their powers for their own benefit so why are u complaining it not like this guy forced you vto read his story. If are one of those selfless pricks that think everything they say or do is right then you're just hypocrite. Dude just go read other stories if you want to read about "responsible" unselfish bastars.
5yr
Prometheus2000
Prometheus2000Lv4

Dude this time I do understand your point about a author's synopsis but I was talking about your last comment in which you were complaining about the personality of the MC. Dude are telling me that a person cannot write from a villains or morally grey character points of view because that is why I reply to your comment telling to not read this story if you are one people that like heroes sacrificing themselves for other people that they don't even know. That is why even though I don't hate spiderman I don't like him either because of that stupid sense of responsibility, I mean would you like spiderman sacrifice your love life for other people be honest. I get is kind his fault that uncle Ben die but he doesn't have to go out of his way to help everyone like he does.

Saberswordguy:Bro author of course cant force anyone to read but why do you think authors make synopsis its there for to get readers intrested and it escalates to reading the novel and from there the reader can judge the novel for themselves
5yr
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Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

Yah got the wrong guy I'm not the one who wrote the review dang I was just pointing out what was wrong with your reply like your point of view that author didn't force the guy to read so he shouldn't be complaining but like I said a synopsis was used to pretty much convince the readers to read then access it for themselves and this dude I forgot what he wrote didn't like it so he just pointed out what he found bad in the story that is what a review is for or is it a crime now to give your honest opinion and yeah.....

Prometheus2000:Dude this time I do understand your point about a author's synopsis but I was talking about your last comment in which you were complaining about the personality of the MC. Dude are telling me that a person cannot write from a villains or morally grey character points of view because that is why I reply to your comment telling to not read this story if you are one people that like heroes sacrificing themselves for other people that they don't even know. That is why even though I don't hate spiderman I don't like him either because of that stupid sense of responsibility, I mean would you like spiderman sacrifice your love life for other people be honest. I get is kind his fault that uncle Ben die but he doesn't have to go out of his way to help everyone like he does.
5yr
Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

Yah got the wrong guy I'm not the one who wrote the review dang I was just pointing out what was wrong with your reply like your point of view that author didn't force the guy to read so he shouldn't be complaining but like I said a synopsis was used to pretty much convince the readers to read then access it for themselves and this dude I forgot what he wrote didn't like it so he just pointed out what he found bad in the story that is what a review is for or is it a crime now to give your honest opinion and yeah.....

Prometheus2000:Dude this time I do understand your point about a author's synopsis but I was talking about your last comment in which you were complaining about the personality of the MC. Dude are telling me that a person cannot write from a villains or morally grey character points of view because that is why I reply to your comment telling to not read this story if you are one people that like heroes sacrificing themselves for other people that they don't even know. That is why even though I don't hate spiderman I don't like him either because of that stupid sense of responsibility, I mean would you like spiderman sacrifice your love life for other people be honest. I get is kind his fault that uncle Ben die but he doesn't have to go out of his way to help everyone like he does.
5yr
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Erosire
ErosireAuthor

This is a compulsory 5 stars rating from the author ;) Hope you guys enjoy the story. The first arc is pretty much Hollywood Delight on steriod. Just with the power to manipulate time. All the boring bits are fast pace to get to the juicy parts. Sex scene are plenty, especially ones that I really want to write about. Lots of face slapping and so on. Kingdom building part is later. Just imagine tanks running over a bunch of medieval knights. ;) Anyway, enjoy the story.

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Dimikb
DimikbLv14

This is deffinetly a gold that in my point of view deserv to be in the same line with "I have a mansion...." in the ratings. The story is about the guy who for some reason awoken to the power of time manipulation and time travel. And he is deffinetly worthy of such power, as he understands how godly is his power and that he himself desrve to be a ruler of the world. It is a protogonist that seen so much that this world does not pose a chalenge to him. He will enslave and kill those that stand on his way, pulverise anyone that would disrespect him with no questions asked. He is not some pushover with no ambition like all MC's in Japanese issekai novels. Thats how a ruler should be. He is no hero but as he has seen destruction of galaxy and death of the humanity by their own hands (felt it even as his body was anigilated to atoms by atom bombs a hubdred or even thousand time until he learned how to use the power), he decide to save humanity from itself. And thats a story of how he does that. You believe the theory of conspirasy and world government? Well he is the one behind the worlds government!

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helixio
helixioLv5

This story is just great.Try it. One of his negatives is that the beginning of the story makes the hero look too OP.To have read until the last chapter (78 actually) this is still true .By against the author suggests that in truth it is not not so powerful compared to real power. I could write several pages on it. What basically stands out is: - You have to love amoral MCs (in the style of killing and torturing innocent people to achieve their goals). -Love the MC Op (at least at the beginning) -Do not be patriotic (SPOILER: one of the goals of the hero is the world domination because the countries are useless at our time (which is not wrong but hey we do not live in a world of Care Bears)).

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YoungThuggishDDLv13

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koolsalad
koolsaladLv12

Character is a social path. Plays the “ I’m good etc etc humanity to greatness “ but all of the chapters I’ve read are about him legalising rape, advocating for slavery and a bunch of other stuff. The MC is a loser and really dumb.

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Vylric
VylricLv13

When I first started reading this, it was exciting and had my full attention. The premise was good, the story started out well, and the character was somewhat interesting. Now the MC has turned into the biggest hypocrite, doesn't follow his own beliefs, and is probably a psychopath. The author has repeatedly written this and that about the beliefs the character follow.....then throws it out the window. The author seems to want to write 3 books in one and it's all over the place with no real consistency. It has turned into a wish fulfillment story. I would say read the first 40 or so chapters then drop.

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StressedByHW
StressedByHWLv4

The story is a masterpiece for people who likes psycho main character but not a good book for those who think main character should save people. For me personally I love this book but sometime I think he goes to far which I don’t hate since I’m fine with any character that isn’t nice guy

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RusskiyPoimet
RusskiyPoimetLv2

The main character is not ruthless. He's a scum who kills and tortures innocent people. He stirred up the country, and then ordered the execution of half the population JUST LIKE that! Too proud, too stupid. Underline, STUPID! He does not think through the steps in advance, for which he gets in the balls. And then the degenerate gets angry and destroys the street of homeless people. Also, the author did not really understand the capitalist system and says that his" great " country, the United States, is at the peak of its power. Fucking it is not at the peak of power, capitalism leads to the degradation of the population and self-destruction of the country ©Karl Marx. One of the" comrades " of the main character said that the USA was built on bones, blood and innocent deaths, said that there is no OTHER WAY! * 10 seconds later* I need world peace!!! But in the USSR, people did not cut each other's throats and lived more than perfectly. ###Yes, I know that under the USSR there was socialism. I know it's banned in the United States, but who's stopping you FROM just READING?### Pretends to be cool, constantly bragging, but in fact is only an empty place.

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Egor_Memnonov
Egor_MemnonovLv3

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KhanTheConqueror
KhanTheConquerorLv12

A total waste of time. This kind of concept could have been so much more but meh. to fill the 140 characters screw it screw it screw it screw it screw it .

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