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YoungThuggishDD
YoungThuggishDDLv135yr
2020-02-12 22:19

I don't know why this novel rates so high. Don't be fooled by the high ratings, this novel is pretty much garbage. MC is irrational and childish even though he lived a very long life and still acts immature he is so unlikeable and boring, the author doesn't even know how Governments work, i.e When a country that suddenly shows up in the middle of nowhere with advance weaponry in that current timeline I'm hella sure this gonna blow up and all the Governments in the Earth will be making a fuss about this and trying to contact that country already and that country will be making headlines for all media outlets but in this novel the Government does nothing except just scouting the area via battleships and when they sunk the ships of USSR that is pretty much a declaration of WAR and an international incident and I get there's ******* between the USA and USSR at that time but even the USSR, NATO, EU and other countries should've made a move but all other countries did nothing in return and they act like nothing happened or act like that new country doesn't exist. This is bull****, the author only have basic knowledge about economics and his execution for economics is even inaccurate, take for example the MCs Chrono Holdings, when a corporate company horrifyingly grows too big to be on the top in JUST 5 YEARS just by investing in stocks with 100% accuracy I'm hella sure the USA and even thier enemy USSR will be raising an eyebrow to that and there's gonna be a secret investigation against them even if they bribe most of the politicians but still nothing happens. The grammar was below average at best, the story telling was so fast-paced and awful it feels like a summarization. This is crap

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Ken_Uzumaki
Ken_UzumakiLv3

Reread what you just saidI know what your trying to say, but word it differently, it sounds terrible.

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Edge_LordNot
Edge_LordNotLv4

who speak like this now a days

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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv12

Morons, bigots, racists, "SJW" and many more? you'd be surprised.

Edge_LordNot:who speak like this now a days
Kutu
KutuLv4

literally how I picture your image in my head:

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