well i believe that mc is too much op. also in the beginning you can see some reason in the history, but later on all the chapters run between sex, sado and masochism, also the mc has a 2 ia´s helping him, one inside him, other outside, but in a magical ring. when you look at it you are jumping between universes where there is magic, tech, potion, aliens, elven, gods, alchemy long live people and time changing paradox. but all it is inside a whirlpool around the mc. where he just do as he like, also he has a complex with his parent, whenever he is. in a time place his 10 y.o mother is his babysitter, but in the next reality he is saving/ taking control of earth and he is about to have sex with her own mother that in that reality has 20 y.o although all those chapters are a little fun, but breaking and jumping that way made the novel too much heavy, where some times one has to ask when or where some sideline will continue or how. also the author take too much from others people ideas or novel, just to spice his own work. it was funny but when you used something too much its work backwards. i do think that the author should calm down a little bit, take care about some of the ideas or realities or follow them to a certain degree. not just jumping like crazy every 3-6 chapters and using just the time mastering as glue to unify everything here. the potential for a great novel its here, but it needs to work and polish a little more to be there
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