I like the story a lot and it's an alternate timeline So I'm going to give my honest opinion here Mc: is not a genius to be fair but the author never claims that his mc is a genius. Mc. is too trusting I think that there should be consequences here In my eyes it is a 4.0 but not a 5.0 Good work keep it up
Shiro_the_Hero
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LIKEThanks a lot for the review! :) I'm really glad that you've been enjoying the story so far \o/ And you're correct, I wouldn't really call him a genius - he may be intelligent to an unhealthy degree, but as for talent? He never really had any. Well, except for the ability to understand things if he tries, which... yeah, we all have, to a certain extent xD As for being too trusting, I can see why you'd think this way (especially because some other readers have brought this up before as well). If he was a regular MC, you'd be correct, but as he became an unfathomable being at the very beginning of the story, he can't really experience danger... which is why he acts in such a trusting/risky manner - as there is no risk to him personally, essentially. But don't worry, consequences will happen, He certainly hasn't been taking things too seriously, mostly because of his absolute security - wake-up calls *will* be in store... sometime~
But don't worry, consequences will happen, He certainly hasn't been taking things too seriously, mostly because of his absolute security - wake-up calls *will* be in store... sometime~ Well what can i say? I love it! if you do that then maybe 5.0 lets wait and see
Shiro_the_Hero:Thanks a lot for the review! :) I'm really glad that you've been enjoying the story so far \o/ And you're correct, I wouldn't really call him a genius - he may be intelligent to an unhealthy degree, but as for talent? He never really had any. Well, except for the ability to understand things if he tries, which... yeah, we all have, to a certain extent xD As for being too trusting, I can see why you'd think this way (especially because some other readers have brought this up before as well). If he was a regular MC, you'd be correct, but as he became an unfathomable being at the very beginning of the story, he can't really experience danger... which is why he acts in such a trusting/risky manner - as there is no risk to him personally, essentially. But don't worry, consequences will happen, He certainly hasn't been taking things too seriously, mostly because of his absolute security - wake-up calls *will* be in store... sometime~
Katoph:But don't worry, consequences will happen, He certainly hasn't been taking things too seriously, mostly because of his absolute security - wake-up calls *will* be in store... sometime~ Well what can i say? I love it! if you do that then maybe 5.0 lets wait and seeimage