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  • Katoph
    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Shiro_the_Hero

    1.No I don't think it's harsh, you're clearing up a lot of things here, this Odin type has clearly misunderstood a lot, but what you should do is write that your Mc is omnipotent/almighty in the starting of you fan fic best really fat, but it's already been written here that you can make him the One aAbove all so he seems to have at least understood that, 2. What I don't like here is The Inde writes things here without having proof, and also lying, even if he doesn't like to hear it, insults are also here, you should stick to what you can prove and not write anything for which you have no proof, so for all of us should stick to the truth, and with what you can prove, that applies to me to you to us all. I love you fan fic its not perfect but i love it and something like this makes it look ugly in my opinion there is no place for something like that here and this should be Deletetd but this is only my opinion, However I look forward to more chapters of you

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  • Katoph
    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Inde

    I admit that it really looks a little fishi but Im sorry to say that but unfortunately it does not confirm what you say is nothing personally thought only there is such a function here on the website to watch it. I will not argue but then unfortunately I can not withdraw my like I have written a novel myself is not even something good you can take a look if you want I still go in peace thank you for your time

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  • Katoph
    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Inde

    Okei I don't argue with you, but is there a function here that shows that this is him? I see that the account is new but not more if that is the case I would withdraw my like, because I like to read it myself, but I give comments like never before

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  • Katoph
    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Shiro_the_Hero

    But don't worry, consequences will happen, He certainly hasn't been taking things too seriously, mostly because of his absolute security - wake-up calls *will* be in store... sometime~ Well what can i say? I love it! if you do that then maybe 5.0 lets wait and see

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    Katoph1yr
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    I like the story a lot and it's an alternate timeline So I'm going to give my honest opinion here Mc: is not a genius to be fair but the author never claims that his mc is a genius. Mc. is too trusting I think that there should be consequences here In my eyes it is a 4.0 but not a 5.0 Good work keep it up

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  • Katoph
    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Inde

    Well, it looks like he didn't fall for it

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    Katoph1yr
    Replied to Inde

    I'll say something here too You say: He has more likes because no one bothers to open a review you are really pubic so you know to assert such a thing, are you now all seeing and all knowing? because this lie doesn't make the slightest bit of sin Odinsohn asked you if his actions have no consequences Because he owns a system, from the beginning but you never answered this question, you want to be right about your behavior but you are not right, you want a genius, I'll show you a really badass Sōsuke Aizen from Bleach xD is one, as far as the sealing in his system is concerned, it is nowhere written that he can remove it at any time as he wants, I think that would not make a sin either You say the gods act like children some of them with 100% security! but you don't know their true intentions, you can't because nothing in that direction has been published yet Please don't claim anything without having proof and you can't have it because Danmachi is not a finished story so minus points for you without end, Osinsohn for you why waste your time on someone like that? He doesn't answer the question because he knows the truth

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