Review Detail of ubietobi in Wish Fulfillment System
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For a fanfic it´s done great. I think power ranking 170 is to low, probably because the chapters are rather long and it updates rather slow. If the chapters were split into daily updates you would probably get a few more votes The negative point is actually the title, wish fulfillment system sounds too much like the typical 100+ brainless sluts harem stories I first noticed the novel over half a year ago and didn´t give it a try because of that
Wish Fulfillment System
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It´s not, like I really want you to change it the length of the chapters, so far into the story it might actually backfire. There are also a few rather successful stories with long chapters around, and as you are near 100 chapters more will surely pick it up. I don´t care much about the cover, but it´s easier to remember pictures, so you are probably right. I´m a little sad for tiona, she is one of my favorite characters and would like the mc to fall for her as he grows in character and can´t only really feel for lonely characters..but I know that would probably be a really bad and cringe development for the story, it´s good as it is
Thanks a lot for leaving your review! I'm glad that you're enjoying my story so far :) You're definitely correct, if I split the chapters into parts and uploaded them separately, the fast increase in chapter count would probably attract more readers, without me actually writing a single word more than I already do. I sadly can't bring myself to split the chapters into parts... I know that I'm losing out in the Power Stone game because of that, but idk... I'd just rather post a full chapter than parts of it - it'd just feel... completely wrong. I wouldn't want people to be forced to stop reading at any point aside from the actual end of a chapter. As for the name, you do make a fair point, it might evoke thoughts like the ones you had in a few people. I can certainly see why. Still, it truly is the best name for the story I plan to tell, as weird as that may sound to you right now xD I thought about it for a long, long time before choosing it. (I personally think that the biggest reason for people potentially avoiding to read the story is the lack of a cover - I personally don't actually read any stories without a cover... ^^' I didn't want to just steal some art, so I've been saving for a while. I should be able to commission a good cover in the coming months. That problem should then be fixed :D )