Just a tool to make money. Overall the same as all other fanfics of that author, just with different characters and not much new ideas.

No. There is a great amount of girls in Dxd. So many, it´s hard to write plot with them and the mc. What´s the use of more genderbent girls?

Guys.. Is it that hard to just scroll down about 11 lines and read, why his HP are like that?^^

Story has a good start. Human is not necessarily a bad starting choice. It´s not, like the other races are very helpful as soon as the ExE arc begins. With his ability he has more chances to survive than ultimate class beings

The Fic is well written and fun to read Negative point is, that Rias is not really that bad (LN Version). She is a typical princess right out of childhood - what do you expect from a young girl. She is actually a nice girl, just too naive and waiting for a shining knight instead of working hard.

Rias was just a teen girl reaching puperty with a slight princess syndrom. Not really likable, but not bad enough to be a symbol of hate

Of cource it´s a ron.. Harry Potter reference?

yes

+1

The grammar is actually rather good for a fanfiction

If you are german, the phrase "elemental waffe" sounds really strange

I actually liked the novel for the first few hundred chapters, but somehow the mc degressed to a psychopathic hypocrite. He is searching for the slightest imagined insult to rob, it would be ok if he were described as an evil character, but the writing style suggests he is something like a hero. The farm setting develops into a background setting, conceptually it is more like a system that evolves or multiplies what it is given. It´s like someone wanted to create a unique system but had no idea how or what it should do

After reading this story I started to play fallout again. New Vegas had the best background. Brotherhood arc is a bit long, but gives a good reason why he is strong even on level 1

One of the few actually well written R-18 novels. MC is relatable, very easy to make fun of but determined

The story is not bad, but the he/she him/her errors are rather cringe to read. That´s also not a hard thing to write correctly. You know, that because of these errors there are a lot of scenes thar feal like yaoi lucky perfert?

It´s not, like I really want you to change it the length of the chapters, so far into the story it might actually backfire. There are also a few rather successful stories with long chapters around, and as you are near 100 chapters more will surely pick it up. I don´t care much about the cover, but it´s easier to remember pictures, so you are probably right. I´m a little sad for tiona, she is one of my favorite characters and would like the mc to fall for her as he grows in character and can´t only really feel for lonely characters..but I know that would probably be a really bad and cringe development for the story, it´s good as it is

not yuki siblings? brothers would mean that mikan is male

For a fanfic it´s done great. I think power ranking 170 is to low, probably because the chapters are rather long and it updates rather slow. If the chapters were split into daily updates you would probably get a few more votes The negative point is actually the title, wish fulfillment system sounds too much like the typical 100+ brainless sluts harem stories I first noticed the novel over half a year ago and didn´t give it a try because of that