Review Detail of maelvoid_2025 in Asura [Bleach]

1) the story isn't bad and I like the idea of a hollow who will become the strongest in hueco mundo 2) your perspective of writing is terrible it's like you want to be third person,second, and first all at the same time which makes the story less understandable 3)if you're gonna write a ff use the original name of the place because last I remember it's not world of hollow it's called hueco mundo and it's not a world it's just in a different dimension 4) the words you use during the story just don't mix well with making it just terrible wording 5)do more research on the manga/anime you wanna write a ff of cuase it makes it easier to understand like you barely have any world background information like not everyone has watched bleach